The entries in this category could benefit from a tighter edit and more visual variety.

First- This story has a clear beginning, middle and end. No one particular image jumps out at us, they're all at the same level/good. Good visual variety, and we can tell some time was spent with the subject.
Second- Nice expressions and a few nice singles, but lacks a clear storyline like the first place entry. Some images were cropped too tight (missing body parts) and the first three images visually read the same.
Third- Less is more with this story. Lead and end on strong images. This first image in this story should not be included and knocked it down to third place.

Mark R. Rummel
Jeffrey Smith
Charlotte Bodak